Every time you Feel lonely or sad Or you feel like Your life doesn't Make sense and When it feels like Things are the Darkest is when You must search For the light and The love just waiting Beneath the surface Its always there if You know where To look inside of Your heart and Soul and when You find that Light that leads You through the Storm and through The trials of life you Will feel that much Stronger and whole Through the lessons Of life that might Come your way If you have faith You can move Mountains and Change the course Of rivers with your New found strength And faith and light That is flowing in Your soul as you Begin to show And share your Inner light and Strength to others To be the beacon Of light and faith To show others the Way when they feel Lonely or like life Isn't fair you can show Them through your Own light and experience There is always a brighter Way through the storm And showing and sharing Your gift of light and healing To all who are willing to see
i appreciate the motivating force which i find in all your poems, they radiate pure light and full the life with meanings, with presence of God and higher thoughts..and even make me inspired...
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As fine an inspirational write of forging on, and having confidence, and faith in accepting what is, and what can be as I have ever read!! When we use our own experiences to help others to live in a more positive way, it is always good for those around us, as well as oneself!
A very powerful write!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
It truly makes me happy that you understand the truth.
So beautiful. That's so true, love and beauty are always there in every moment, it just takes us to allow ourselves to receive it. And sometimes, when you feel broken you don't feel worthy of receiving it. That's when it takes strength i think, to know that all that love and light is wanting so badly to shower you with everything it's got if you allow yourself to believe you are worthy of it. And we all are!
Loneliness is an indescribable emotion.... yet your words are filled with both sympathy and empathy for when describing this powerful force.
You have captured the feeling of loneliness very well here Ahmad and I am sure your words are inspiring and soothing for all those who will get a chance to read your lovely poem......
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Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you. I know what its like to feel that deep loneliness and to walk in a crow of people and fee.. read moreThank you. I know what its like to feel that deep loneliness and to walk in a crow of people and feel more alone than when you walked out but I wanted to write something for people that were experiencing it as well as a piece to help people through it because it is what helped me.
It's always good to remember to look at the brighter side of life because it will help us go through tough times. This once again very inspiring, my friend.
Loving this, it's like the perfect pick me up poem for someone to read when their mood is down. Very nice lovely write, love the message in this. Helping others when they are down is truly something nice.
My name is Ahmad and I have posted a lot of my poetry on hellopoetry.com but I wanted to check out this site and see if I can start posting and reading poetry here. more..