Dancing in the Moment

Life is like dancing
We dance and twirl
From one moment
To the next as we

Spin through space
And time spinning
And colliding into
Each other as our

Hearts and souls
Move to the ever
Present groove of
Life as we dance

Together in the
Cosmic rhythm 
Of life and love
Personified through

Our own unique
Dance and voice
As we continue
To sing our own

Melody and we 
Sing our own 
Beat our song
And our feet 

Are moving as
One even as
Crazy as our
Individual 

Songs and 
Dances might
Be they all
Dance to the

Same hidden
Beat hidden
Through the
Universe and

Calling the
Dancer and 
The singers 
As we sing

Our praise 
Of love and
Light through
Our lives as 

We exhibit 
Gods wonder
And creativity
Through our

Beautiful dance
And song and
Holy rhythm 
That flows 

Through the
Entire universe
As God plays 
With his children

In new and 
Loving and
Creative ways
With each of us

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

So wonderful thoughts in a poem, life is a dance, its always nice to dance together, not alone! everyone help each other, study the steps of this cosmic dance, and we are all involved in it with love... Thank you, my friend!
{nour}

[New Dawn]

This was written in a very interesting way - I liked the way each stanza flowed into the next - although I was a little breathless after reading - just as if I had been dancing I suppose! Some great ideas, really liked it

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am glad you could feel that internal beat and flow.

[Kajal Gulabani]

Lovely and suppa peaceful.

[Ahmad Cox]

Nice. I wanted this to be fun and uplifting at the same time

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love how true this is, I often think of life as a dance. Everyone does have a different beat yet within life it's a similar beat that connects us all. Such a great write. Loving this part:
" and we
Sing our own
Beat our song
And our feet

Are moving as
One even as
Crazy as our
Individual

Songs and
Dances might
Be they all
Dance to the

Same hidden
Beat hidden
Through the
Universe"

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. I couldn't have said it better myself.

[Annabelle Lee]

This was a teensy bit convenient as i have just returned home from a dance. good as usual. friend.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. Got to love those little convenient moments in life.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

Particularly liked the first two stanzas (: message very well conveyed.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. Life truly is like a dance and we have to be joyful and happy and moving through life with our own dance and beat.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Wow! I really enjoyed reading this one. Just some superb writing here. Thank you for sharing. I especially liked the last four stanzas.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I wanted to write something more positive.

[Sheila Kline]

Beautiful.....love the flow and structure, but most of it the thoughts!!! Your last two verses are especially touching to me!! Yes, God plays with His children in the most wondrous of ways!!!
........a favorite of mine my friend!!

[Ahmad Cox]

I wanted to write something lighter so I am glad it has received such positive reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you liked it. :)

[clairekeown25]

ahh like shiva....bending the fabric of the cosmos with our dancing feet, so much cause for joy

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. I am glad you can understand and see the deeper spiritual meaning in the poem.

[Be myself!]

God job. Its very interesting how you wrote this. I love it.

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could appreciate it.

[Be myself!]

Mhmm