More out of life More out of love More out of peace More out of grace More out of spirit More out of Earth More out of joy More out of Those peaceful Quiet moment in Your soul when you Know you are complete And you are exactly where You need to be at all times and When you can feel the Earth and our Mother and spirit flowing through every Pour of your existence until you get To that point in yourself where You can accept that you Are able to have More peace More grace You are ready To be whole We are all Craving for That oneness Connecting With the Common Collective We call Humanity In loving Peaceful Ways
I really like this one. It's peaceful, serene. There's just one little thing that's bothering me- in "pour of your existence" it should "pore" instead of "pour". Tiny thing, but the words do mean very different things! Aside from that, though, this is a very calming piece and I like it very much.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you. I truly appreciate your review. I know I wanted to write something positive after writing.. read moreThank you. I truly appreciate your review. I know I wanted to write something positive after writing something that was more of a lesson than anything else.
MORE POEMS PLS!!haha..very inspiring Sir:)loved it
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I always appreciate your wonderful comments. And I find I love the fact you always call me sir. It a.. read moreI always appreciate your wonderful comments. And I find I love the fact you always call me sir. It always makes me smile.
This is a very soothing poem (I can tell you now, I'm pretty relaxed now and now I just gotten down another level because of this...which is a good thing). I can tell you're a calm type of person, very relaxed, like to see the good out of everything. Positive kind of person as well.
Very done
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