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A Poem by Ahmad Cox

More out of life
More out of love
More out of peace
More out of grace
More out of spirit
More out of Earth
More out of joy
More out of 
Those peaceful
Quiet moment in
Your soul when you
Know you are complete
And you are exactly where
You need to be at all times and
When you can feel the Earth and our
Mother and spirit flowing through every 
Pour of your existence until you get
To that point in yourself where
You can accept that you
Are able to have
More peace
More grace
You are ready
To be whole
We are all
Craving for
That oneness
Connecting
With the
Common
Collective
We call
Humanity
In loving
Peaceful 
Ways

© 2013 Ahmad Cox


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So that's a way to describe that lovely feeling. :)
Love this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


OMG - The is so positive. Flawless!!!!!! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


So much positivity in words Ahmad. Live, love and be happy my friend. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I am an optimist at heart.
Nice and serene.. Binding words with a hope to bind.. Humane ! Amen!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very humane and positive.. Binding words with a hope to bind.. Peaceful and tranquil read. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this one. It's peaceful, serene. There's just one little thing that's bothering me- in "pour of your existence" it should "pore" instead of "pour". Tiny thing, but the words do mean very different things! Aside from that, though, this is a very calming piece and I like it very much.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I truly appreciate your review. I know I wanted to write something positive after writing.. read more
Your words always sooth me and give me hope for humankind.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

It makes me happy that you feel that way
Love the graphics and how they meld with the words...So soothing and yet deep...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

Nice. I am glad it could have that reaction for you.
MORE POEMS PLS!!haha..very inspiring Sir:)loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jess

11 Years Ago

Oh its my my pleasure Sir:)
Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

I will start calling you miss my dear soul.
Jess

11 Years Ago

,,hmmm,,okay,
This is a very soothing poem (I can tell you now, I'm pretty relaxed now and now I just gotten down another level because of this...which is a good thing). I can tell you're a calm type of person, very relaxed, like to see the good out of everything. Positive kind of person as well.
Very done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

Yep. I am a fairy an optimist at heart.

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Ahmad Cox
Ahmad Cox

San Jose, CA



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