Divinity is inside Divinity is God's Love in your heart We all carry a piece Of God's love inside We all carry that Divine grace and Mercy that comes When we least expect When we look inside When we truly search Ourselves we will find A little piece of God And beauty inside of All of our hearts We are all searching For that divinity We just don't always Know where to look We can look everywhere Instead of looking in Ourselves and seeing the Love brewing inside It can be very easy To try and rely on Other people Or even other Things to dictate How we feel or Try and steal That divinity and Peace and love With fear and hate And uncertainty Depression and Darkness can Steal our inner Divinity and light As well but when You find that light Inside of yourself You will begin to Glow with God's Love and peace And happiness And whatever Was hurting or Whatever was Causing stress or Strife in your life Will melt away As God's love And light and Divinity heals You from the Inside out Letting you See what God Sees when he Looks at you And says I am Pleased with all Of my creations And I love all Of my children Just the same You are truly Beautiful in the Eyes of your Creator no matter What the world Or even you Might think We all have that Inner beauty and Worth and unique Glow that is just Waiting to flow
Very positive, I like it. My only suggestion would be to consider adding in some punctuation. There are a few spots where the poem didn't feel like it was flowing correctly because I wasn't sure how it was meant to be read. A comma here or there would help that. Nice work regardless!
Your words give me cause to shout, "Hallelujah, Praise God"!!
The heart of our Creator graces His love to show through you!!!!
Beautiful, and inspiring, and certainly one of my favorites!!
this is beautiful. i like the two last lines the best. i mean the whole thing is great, but: Glow that is just
Waiting to flow
are my favorites.
this is beautiful and i hope u consider it a success
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you. I know I wanted to show people that love and grace that are hurting.
My name is Ahmad and I have posted a lot of my poetry on hellopoetry.com but I wanted to check out this site and see if I can start posting and reading poetry here. more..