Broken

There are people 
That are broken
So many people
That are hurting
Today in their 
Hearts and souls

We are all broken
In our ways as we
Try to heal ourselves
As we move along
In life and death

Healing ourselves
As we mend our
Hearts and soul
One scar at a time

Fixing what used
To be jagged and 
Worn and creating

Something new
Until we are

Whole again.

Reviews

[Gray Witch]

Beautiful poem

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you liked it.

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Beauty from the pain - well done.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I liked the poem we as well.

[MandaBear]

i feel like this right now.

[Ahmad Cox]

I hope you feel better

[Annabelle Lee]

Keeping our heads down ill we can be whole again. sometimes it just helps to know I'm not the only one.

[Ahmad Cox]

Hug. I think we are all fragile and human in our own ways.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

Yes we all are broken in a way or another , thank you for this lovely poem :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I hope it helped

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

I love the honesty. And it ends on an uplifting note, offering hope. I really enjoyed it.

[Ahmad Cox]

I wanted to share hope for those who were broken.

[Felicity's Eve]

Very nice and something that every one should read when they are in need of kindness :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I know that you share kindness to those who are broken as well.

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[Tasha]

This is nice and special to all those that are in need of a friend. Great write!
~Tasha

[Ahmad Cox]

I had a feeling you would like this one. :) I know there are a lot of people that I feel could really use this right now.

[Tasha]

Yes there are; your rights always make me smile :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I wanted to symbolize the words and statements being broken and then coming together in one unifying statement at the end.

[Tasha]

You surely did that.