Broken

There are people 
That are broken
So many people
That are hurting
Today in their 
Hearts and souls

We are all broken
In our ways as we
Try to heal ourselves
As we move along
In life and death

Healing ourselves
As we mend our
Hearts and soul
One scar at a time

Fixing what used
To be jagged and 
Worn and creating

Something new
Until we are

Whole again.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

True emotional write about how people can be "Broken". Nice one.

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you for sharing this nice poem!

[Mary]

It has been said that our brokenness releases the light within. Well done, A

[Sheila Marie Carr]

Wow! Broken that's so amazing.
Very well written

[Junert]

And we will be whole again.

[Lexi Nicole]

Simple with a really great message. Nice work, thanks for sharing!

[Sheila Kline]

May all of the broken be healed by those who are able to bring love and healing to them!
Thank you for bringing to light those who are without mercy and love!

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I feel like it is my true calling in life.

[Kajal Gulabani]

I couldn't agree more.. We are all in haze to fix up our scattered pieces of life's puzzle.. Gud stuff !

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. We are all broken in our own ways

[under-the-water]

your use of strong verbs are what i think is best. i really like "Fixing what used/ to be jagged and/ worn and creating."
i write in a flow that i really like

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could appreciate it. I wanted to write for the people that I knew were hurting that needed it the most.

[Frieda P]

Your words are healing and soothing, but I'm still picking up some of that crazy glue. Nice one Ahmad!

[Ahmad Cox]

Hehe I love you frieda. You always manage to make me smile in some way.