Air

Air

A Poem by Ahmad Cox

There is air between us
That touches everything
Every part of the world
Has touched some other part of the world
At some time or other
We are all living in air
There is air that we breathe
That is in us all
That is in everything
Even the deepest depths of the ocean
To the deepest cave
Still has some air
Touching
Swirling
Caressing us all the same
It blows with force sometimes
To let us know it's there
None of us are separated
Though we are separated by space
Separated by time
There might be air in between
But all of our hearts are connected
In their own ways
And every single one of us
At some point in our lives
Has been recycled by the Earth
And by the air
And by the ground
Recycled and reused 
Death and rebirth
Played over and over again
Until we all are apart of each other
And we are a part of the Earth
We can't deny it
We all live here on this Earth
Breathing the same air
Taking up the same space
Living together on this Earth we call home.

© 2013 Ahmad Cox


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Love the thought in this:
"There is air between us
That touches everything
Every part of the world
Has touched some other part of the world
At some time or other"

Love:
"None of us are separated
Though we are separated by space"

Very nice:
"There might be air in between
But all of our hearts are connected
In their own ways
And every single one of us
At some point in our lives
Has been recycled by the Earth"

I love the way that air is something that connects us all. Really good write. Beautiful.

Correction:
home
"Living together on this Earth we call hom"

Possible correction:
a part
"Until we all are apart of each other"

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

I am glad you could feel that inner deep meaning and truth behind it. Even we are connected in our o.. read more
Nice metaphorical piece of writing, the spaces between us are really what bring us closer together. We all breathe this same 'air'. Light and a good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

Hehe I am glad it could give you that light effect through my poem.
It is so wonderful we share this space we call "Home", our Earth!
Another lovely write of noticing the world around us! It is good to embrace that which defines who we are!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

Yep the earth is full of marvelous things we take for granted every day.
"Every part of the world/ Has touched some other part of the world". Those are without a doubt my favorite lines. You have an incredible awareness of the world around you, and you translate it into words beautifully.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

I am glad you could feel that through my writing.
Wonderful message and a wonderful write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

11 Years Ago

The air is there. :)

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Added on January 10, 2013
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Ahmad Cox
Ahmad Cox

San Jose, CA



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