The Night is Calling

The Night is Calling
The Moon is beckoning
Me under her beautiful
And Ethereal glow calling
All night owls who happen
To stray too far away from
Home on a beautiful night
Like this are ever trapped in 
Your light and mesmerized
Like a moth to a flame 
Reaching for you and 
Feeling your heavenly
Influence and tug on the
Earth like two drunken
Dancers you dance in 
Space together circling
Around each other in
A loving embrace that
Will continue to play
Out night after night
Day after day as the
Earth and the Moon
And even the Sun
Begin to play as they
Circle around each other
Day in and day out
Calling to the wayward
Soul who happens upon
Their dance and feels
The ever present tug 
And influence of our
Beautiful Moon when
The night is calling and
'The Sun is still deep
Asleep in its bed

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love the imagery in this, especially this part:
"and mesmerized
Like a moth to a flame"

Really nice write, I also like the title choice.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. The night truly is calling our name.

[Frieda P]

I like this, I'm one of those crazy people who can't sleep so often I'll go for a walk in the middle of the night. This one calls my name. Nice.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. I always feel so much more aware and powerful during the night and especially when the full moon is out.

[Frieda P]

Ha, are you trying to tell me something? ;-P

[Lexi Nicole]

Beautiful imagery. I could picture everything so perfect. It's like you're able to paint with words. Love it!

[Ahmad Cox]

I am an owl totem at heart so I have a special connection to the moon and I wanted to write it in a very sensual and sexual play and dance and make something mystical and erotic out of something people take for granted every day,

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, another beautiful write of the moon and the sun! I like to be the soul who happens upon their dance and feels the influence of our beautiful moon!

[Ahmad Cox]

She is wonderful indeed

[BLACK PRINCE]

This is a beautiful poem.
But I just love the last 2 lines:
'The sun is still deep
as sleep in its bed.'

WELL DONE

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. :)

[Bound In Red]

I agree with Elizabeth. This was quite the sensual way of describing the dance in our solar system.

[Ahmad Cox]

Love and spirituality and sensuality are very intertwined

[Bound In Red]

It was very well demonstrated in this write.

[Felicity's Eve]

As I said before, I used to like the night very much and this is pretty much how I felt. :)

Nicely written! :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

I love how you describe the earth and moon in such a sensual way. The sun too. It's as if, in the sky, the universe is making love to itself haha

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could get the bigger picture. Thats exactly what I was trying to describe. Like two lovers making love constantly and eternally dancing in the night sky.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-Smith]

Beautiful.

[Ahmad Cox]

I think its because my main totem animal is the owl that I have a special connection to the night and to them moon in general but the ironic thing is the scientists always say that they know that gravity exists but they don't know or can't figure out why or how it got there in there in the first place. I honestly believe that the law of love and attraction still applies to gravity. Its like two essences continually falling into each other as they try and embrace each other. Everything in the universe is held together by this universal love or embrace and attraction

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-Smith]

that is a nice thought

[Ahmad Cox]

I feel it intuitively