Salvation

Salvation

Hush child 
Quiet your eyes
Salvation is at hand
Even though your 
Burdens might seem
Heavy know that the
Light is at the end of 
The tunnel and the dark
Days are soon at an end
Trust in the light and in hope
If you have faith through 
The storm you will start to
See the hidden beauty
And messages that are 
Waiting if you know 
Where to look
Salvation is at hand
Every soul longs to be
Healed and cherished
We all want to know
That things will be ok
And at the end of the day
We will be loved and 
Counted for in this world
We all want to know our
Voices count in the crowd 
And we all want to feel
Like our life has a purpose
And a plan but its through
The trials when it can seem
Like our trials and burdens
Can never end and darkness
Can consume our souls and
Cloud everything we see
But its during those times
When we must seek that 
Inner salvation and strength
To keep ourselves from 
Sinking in the muck of
The day so we can stand
Straight and strong and rise
With each new day with a new
Sense of hope and strength 
Emerging with each new day

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

An uplifting write like a thought of meaningful expressive hope. I like this, so true how darkness seems to cover us and our light with our souls.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep but its when we accept that light and healing that salvation can truly occur.

[Annabelle Lee]

much better understood when read aloud, wonderful write

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am glad. I wanted this to be a declaration of faith but its been nice to see how many people have appreciated its message as well.

[Felicity's Eve]

This kept me hooked all the way through. Such a refreshing concept this is!

Great work :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am glad you liked it. I wanted to write some strong prayer poems to start out the new year.

[Felicity's Eve]

And you're doing really well with them.

Keep up the awesome work! :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am glad you can understand the deeper lesson and truth behind them.

[Felicity's Eve]

And I am glad that you are sharing these amazing works of yours with everyone here :)

[william keepers]

Salvation can happen in an instant, and so it does, over and over again. It is always given when asked for.

[AK]

Wow! This poem is wonderful! I lovey sway you portrayed the fact that darkness always pours into light:))
Your first line (Hush child) caught my attention immediately and kept me in it's realm until the poem ended. Great poem!
Keep writing!

[luviva]

ohh AHMAD this is such a great piece.
i really love it being a believer i just feel my soul being rekindled.
this is encouraging, u knw its great to know tht throught tht tunnel at the end u will find tht light!!
real love it en continue insipiring my friend!

[Ahmad Cox]

That really means a lot coming from a fellow believer. Thanks. Keep shining on

[luviva]

en thanxx for the write u knw... listening or reading about other people's beliefs really helps strengthen one's soul.. so thank you

[beautiful dreamer]

oh how beautiful, i nearly flushed out my contacts. i love poems that can make me cry

[Ahmad Cox]

Aww. That means a lot to me. I am glad that my poem could affect you in such a strong way. I wanted to write two poems of strong faith as a type of resolution to start out the new year like a prayer or a mantra I could try and uphold.

[beautiful dreamer]

good idea. lol i cry alot. very emotional person

[Sugar Plum ♥]

sounds like beautiful prayer! I wish always we remember this beautiful light, that is waiting for us at the end of the tunnel....It`s is worth fighting for and obtsakles ...even we are sometimes not strong enough to stand all..but NEED to be. and i love this eternal light...may salvation come!
nour~

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep and I pray and hope salvation comes to you as well

[Frieda P]

It's a strong write and it shouts a message of hope very clearly.
I especially like the way you started this piece with 'Hush child' as a calming effect.



Should be "every soul 'longs' to be"....

[Ahmad Cox]

Thanks. :)