Shame

Its a shame 
That people 
Have to hurt
In this world

I can feel the 
World and the
Pain that is in
It but what I 

Also feel and 
Sense is this 
General raise 
Of conscience

That is also 
Happening
Right before
Our eyes 

I soar above
The world in
My thoughts
Sending my

Angels out to 
Give love to the
World and to 
Shine grace and 

Mercy and love
To the people of
The Earth that 
Could use it the 

Most but what 
I have also sensed
And even felt inside
Of myself is growing

Its like a quickening
Everything is faster
Speeding towards
An ever more chaotic

World that we seem
To understand less
And less about but
What I have also 

Felt and witnessed
Myself is also the
General raise of 
Conscience of the

People that see
The truth for 
What it is and
Bringing in that

Diving healing
And love and
Understanding
The true workings

Of God and our
Mother but also
Understanding
And comprehending

The oneness and the
Unity that is inside 
Of our hearts if we 
Connect with the 

Love and the spirit
That is residing in
Our hearts and 
Moving towards

A more connected
And whole future
Where people act
Out of love and 

Peace instead of 
Hate and anger 
And start seeing 
The world for 

The beautiful
And wonderful
Place it truly 
Can become

Reviews

[AK]

Wow! This poem is splendid! No words from me can tell you how much I like this poem and how absolutely brilliant it is. The concluding stanza wrapped up the poem so well and the whole theme and message of your poem was commendable. Keep writing!

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am sending happy new year love your way

[AK]

:) I wish you a great year too!

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. Likewise.

[AK]

:)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

My dear friend, THIS IS PURE GOLD ! The metrica is outstanding, these beautiful short triplets linked one by one by enjembaments look pretty much like a chain, the topic is philosophical, still, written with such simplicity to be easily readable even for a child. Loved it, can't use a better word than "love" for this poem :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I really appreciate it. I didn't know how people would feel about this one when I first wrote it so I am glad to receive such positive reviews.

[afra]

this is so beautiful and deep ...well done

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I really appreciated the poems you sent to me as well.

[Clockwork]

You see much with the eyes of your soul and the heart of your pen. I think you do have a good sense of which way the world is moving. I think situations like the shooting at the Sandy Hook Elementary School show the chaos of the world, and the response after it happened shows the care that you speak of in this poem.

I like how you start with the word shame and then take the poem in a positive direction. This poem has a lot of light and a lot of wisdom. I am glad that I found it.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am glad you could appreciate it. :)

[Gray Witch]

You, my friend, are always optimistic and it is contagious....

[Ahmad Cox]

Yay. That was my secret plan all along.

[SimpleMind]

Nice! It's like I am watching a movie with a lots of bad people and then see good people trying to change the bad ones. You also played with you words in an amazing way that in the end I have to smile without knowing the reason why. :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I always try and look on the bright side of things,

[Frieda P]

It's a wonderful sentiment, and a beautiful dream, I wish I felt half as hopeful as you. Uplifting read...well done.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I try to be an optimist at heart. I think its the inner fairy in me. Always trying to spread joy and happiness and optimism wherever I go.

[Frieda P]

Ha, where do you find an inner fairy? ;-)
I'm a realist, I don't think I came with one...

[Dr. Wood ?]

you put your point over very well my friend, I do not have your faith but I share in your dream

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I try to have faith in the positive. Its one of the only things that truly keeps me sane and being able to continue to spread joy and happiness to others is my optimism.

[Dr. Wood ?]

It is the only way forward.....Pessimists walk backwards

[Ahmad Cox]

Good way to look at it. I like it

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Oh how I hope and pray that this is so. There are those who claim the opposite and call the lovers of light and love naive and ignorant. But this is the message I would like sent out the world. Perhaps a few more of us could be heard. Bless.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am sending blessing to you as well

[Sirius King]

great write, there is a great optimistic message in this
i agree there does seems to be a raise in consciousnesses around the world
hopefully it reaches everyone,,, united we stand- divided we fall

[Ahmad Cox]

Very true statement. We all need to come together if we are to survive.