Shame

Its a shame 
That people 
Have to hurt
In this world

I can feel the 
World and the
Pain that is in
It but what I 

Also feel and 
Sense is this 
General raise 
Of conscience

That is also 
Happening
Right before
Our eyes 

I soar above
The world in
My thoughts
Sending my

Angels out to 
Give love to the
World and to 
Shine grace and 

Mercy and love
To the people of
The Earth that 
Could use it the 

Most but what 
I have also sensed
And even felt inside
Of myself is growing

Its like a quickening
Everything is faster
Speeding towards
An ever more chaotic

World that we seem
To understand less
And less about but
What I have also 

Felt and witnessed
Myself is also the
General raise of 
Conscience of the

People that see
The truth for 
What it is and
Bringing in that

Diving healing
And love and
Understanding
The true workings

Of God and our
Mother but also
Understanding
And comprehending

The oneness and the
Unity that is inside 
Of our hearts if we 
Connect with the 

Love and the spirit
That is residing in
Our hearts and 
Moving towards

A more connected
And whole future
Where people act
Out of love and 

Peace instead of 
Hate and anger 
And start seeing 
The world for 

The beautiful
And wonderful
Place it truly 
Can become

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Lovely write. Truth. Feeling.
Enjoyed the ending as well:
"Where people act
Out of love and

Peace instead of
Hate and anger
And start seeing
The world for

The beautiful
And wonderful
Place it truly
Can become"

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. I feel that more today now than when I first wrote it some time last year.

[Bound In Red]

It really is a shame. But I do have to agree that the world seems to be speeding up, but at the same time it is also becoming more aware of it's problems and trying to fix them.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Its amazing to see the changes happening right before our eyes.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

"I soar above
The world in
My thoughts
Sending my

Angels out to
Give love to the
World and to
Shine grace and

Mercy and love
To the people of
The Earth that
Could use it the

Most"

I wish that could happen, that everyone who needed it could just be sent an angel and then made all better. This is a truly beautiful poem Ahmad. Great job.

[Ahmad Cox]

I really appreciate your kind comments.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

It's no problem (:

[Felicity's Eve]

This is truly amazing! :)

The last few stanzas are ones that I desperately wish more people would take to heart.

It's such a shame that God created such a beautiful earth only to have it plunge further and further into evil. A shame indeed... :(

[Ahmad Cox]

Yes but what gives me hope are the people that are still acting out of love and accepting truth and peace and God into their lives.

[Felicity's Eve]

That is a very good thought. I've been sick for a year (as you've most likely read in my bio) and am having a hard time seeing the good in things through the fever and pain.
Your poems are really bringing back my optimism combined with my daily devotionals. Thank you so much for that :)

[william keepers]

The answer is simple; If we all let go of fear and all the complexities that stem from it, only love remains... Our world becomes more confusing because we are caught up in the complexities of fear, defining them and treating them and so fear itself goes largely ignored. The problem is at the core, not in it's manifestations.

[That_Girl]

Hopefully we'll be able to achieve this at some point. Nice piece.

[}Echo{]

Wonderful and deep... I love this write. Wonderful.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

i really wish this world can become so beautiful place, as we all need so much!
HOPE this happen soon or at least..one day...You have strong ideas about the future and even they are like mist..I ca sense the prophecy in your lines...very nice poem, flowing like a pure river of life...
nour~

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could appreciate the deeper meaning

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

A much needed message for a lot of people to receive. (: Thank you for writing this.

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you liked it. I am an optimist at heart.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-Smith]

I aim to be optimistic but I'm a natural born pessimist haha

[Ahmad Cox]

Yeah I used to be an eeyore when I was younger and now I am a happy and proud tigger.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-Smith]

lol maybe I'll evolve

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. We all have that brightness and hope in us.

[Night]

...ah my friend, one can dream can't they....you begin to "see" in the Spirit and with much knowledge comes much sorrow.

[Ahmad Cox]

Very true.