i find this easier to do by sitting somewhere beautiful and quiet, then it happens automatically, it seems like i am not so much looking inside my own mind to quiet the caos, but instead my inner mind is going back to where it belongs and connecting with everything around us, after all there is no space between you and the trees around you, nor no cartesian split between matter and mind, everything is one so we should treat everything equally and with love, i love this poem, thank you
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you. Very beautiful and wonderful review. I would agree with you completely.
I really love this one, problem is all the chatter is coming from inside my own head! So solitude hardly helps that situation, but I do agree we all need alone time. I don't understand people that don't.
I agree with Nora and Neva. We all need to find the time to sit alone and be truly quiet. To fing the desire and courage to look within ourselves and face the ugliest parts of ourselves and turn them into pretty things about us by fixing them.
It takes courage and desire to 'soul-search' ourselves.
You have presented that concept beautifully in this poem :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you. I can tell you have gone through this yourself.
11 Years Ago
I have. And in a way, I still am going through the process. :)
I don't think that we are ever .. read moreI have. And in a way, I still am going through the process. :)
I don't think that we are ever truly done discovering ourselves.
amazing, so full of light and truth, dear friend! I think this poems and thoughts I would like to read many times, in order to put them in my mind! We just need to realize and see the truth and be honest with ourselves...then we will be safe...
nour~
to find ourselves... thats what we need to do to see the greater picture in life...
i love this piece nice job... never stop writing the way you do because it pays off... if not to anyone else it does to me
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
That really means a lot to me. I think its the inner healer in me but I always like knowing that I c.. read moreThat really means a lot to me. I think its the inner healer in me but I always like knowing that I can touch people's lives in a positive way so I am glad my poetry can reach you as well when you need it. I really enjoy the read requests you send me as well.
My name is Ahmad and I have posted a lot of my poetry on hellopoetry.com but I wanted to check out this site and see if I can start posting and reading poetry here. more..