Life Springs Up

Ahmad Cox · 1 day ago

Life Springs Up

Life spring up from everywhere
You can't stop the flow of life
Life is in the most unexpected
Of places if you know where
To look you will find that life
Is harder to extinguish or to 
Control than we might have
Originally anticipated
Everything in the universe
Leans toward life and birth
Just as death and darkness
Can seem to overcome us
Sometimes life is still
Much harder to kill 
Or to get rid of than we
Might know or anticipate
We must learn to flow
With life and let life spring
Naturally instead of trying
To recreate life artificially 
Learning to trust in nature
And life instead of trying
To control or change it
To suit our whims and needs
I think we will find that if
We just allow nature to take
Its course we will be a lot
Better off than if try and
Control or manipulate it

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice write, I like the meaning in it a lot.

"Learning to trust in nature
And life instead of trying
To control or change it"

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Nature and our mother earth in general can teach us a lot of things if we are willing to listen.

[Bound In Red]

I will have to take this into mind while I'm trying to open up and start on my path to being happier. To just not try to control everything in life. But let real pure life control me. And to just flow with life.

[Ahmad Cox]

The true message of the zen master. Dont control life. Just let it flow around you.

[Bound In Red]

And I'm going to try and let that happen more.

[william keepers]

There is something to be said about going with the flow Ahmad. It is highly underrated.

[}Echo{]

This is fool of thought and meaning. I like this. Very nice flow. :)

[luviva]

absolutely ryt!!
life is just an endless stream flowing, as its levels lower
its replenished.
but you know what lowers its level?? its the sins and the way we try to manipulate nature.
replenished only when we correct our mistakes.
we had better learn that before they become too big for us to correct!!

[Lane-roe]

Definitely food for thought. "Learning to trust in nature and life instead of trying to control or change it" - something I find difficult to at times, but it's very good advice! It flows nicely, I like this :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

oh, another special significant poem for me! I really take many words like lessons in my life, and feel it`s very impoartnt to realize all that mystical reasons of life..Yes, it`s like a spring, which we have to enjoy and not to fear of..we have to learn how to let it free and build good energy around. I liked this verses much :
We must learn to flow
With life and let life spring
Naturally instead of trying
To recreate life artificially

nour~
19.12.12

[Ahmad Cox]

It is a truth I wish more people would learn