Spirit

The spirit is in everything
The spirit breathes through
The universe and beyond
The spirit know your heart
It knows your soul
The spirit lives inside of you
The spirit is you 
Once you see this all other
Illusions will start to fade away
Like a cold memory of days
Gone by where you were
Lost and couldn't find
Your way left to the wayside
In bygone days of darkness
And sadness letting the spirit
Warm your heart and soul
Allowing it to consume
Everything that was
Burdening you
Everything that was
Hurting and causing 
You pain to be consumed 
In its ever lasting flame
And power 
This flame lives in all of us
The flame of creation and
The flame of the spirit
We all carry this ancient 
Energy that was there from
The beginning and pouring
Into everything giving
Breathe and life to 
Everything it touched

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

awesome, Ahmed!

[Bound In Red]

I enjoy seeing how spirit is personified for you and it reins true to me as well. Thanks for writing.

[Elaine]

I think this could have been strong if you had showed spirit in your writing rather then explained about spirit itself. Still a good read though

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. :)

[}Echo{]

I really like this. It's a wonderful write. :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I appreciate it.

[}Echo{]

:)

[Ban Heo]

This is an interesting topic but I feel like poetry should show you more than you state. The "meat" of your poem is the spirit. Make sure you don't give too much away.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I can just say one : i totally feel the spirit in your poem! it`s like strong power and light and I like it so much..i feel this spirit of everything, should be connected together in a big ball, that moves in entire universe..and it`s living, you express it in beautiful way, ahmad!
nour~