Crazy Maze

We are living 
In a crazy maze
Trying to find our way
Among the chaos
Among the mess
That surrounds us
Every day
But the quickest way'
To any point
Is a straight line
Sometimes
You have to rise
Above
To see things clearly

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

So much in the world can seem like an obstacle and maze. Nice write.

[Ahmad Cox]

I have appreciated your positive comments and reviews to my poems.

[william keepers]

Very nice! A straight line through a maze. Doesn't sound possible, yet if the maze is an illusion, then trying to navigate it is foolish. However, even a straight line may be an illusion if you don't mind me saying. If you fold the page so the points come together then there is no distance at all. Very contemplative job Ahmad!

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. I am glad you could see the higher truth. We are all connected in this crazy maze by the one source that connects us all.

[Mia]

Not enough deep breaths and deep thinking today. Nice job :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I know right. Its pretty sad but its up to us who truly understand to spread the message.

[Bound In Red]

Wonderful! And everyone now a days are always in such a rush. We do need to rise above somethings to breathe and relax to sort out the chaos.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Very true.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

yes, so truth and wise! the quickest way is the stright line, when you fly and see things from above! you are able to see all the picture, but not always u are able to fly when u need! Thank u so much for this poem...It`s so important for me...
nour~

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could take something from this poem.

[}Echo{]

I like this. Nice poem. :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. :)