Beautiful chaos

The sound of life
Is a beautiful chorus
Playing many tunes
All playing at once
Yet they all have their own unique sound
There own unique part
All playing along
Creating this beautiful chaos
This beautiful mess that is all around us
We can feel the song
The song of the universe
The song of the stars
The song of the earth
The song of the people
We all have our own voice
We all make up our own unique note
Playing in beautiful harmony
Beating the same heart
Beating to many different drums

       

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the title that goes with this lovely write. I really like this part here:
"We all make up our own unique note
Playing in beautiful harmony
Beating the same heart
Beating to many different drums"

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. I truly believe it. We are all beautifully unique in our own ways.

[Bound In Red]

Beautiful. I love how with such few words you can evoke such messages and such imagery. I love it!

[Ahmad Cox]

We are all beautiful notes in the chorus of the universe.

[william keepers]

Yes, somehow the chaos is beautiful, but when it becomes harmonious, then it becomes Divine!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

simply wonderful, ahmad! I love music of the earth and nature, and i love drums :) yess, music is very essential and we need to hear it, even in silent way...when no one listen to the sound, some other creatures can listen..So true poem, we are one big heart, beating with music of the planet...
nour~

[luviva]

i liked the comparision of life to song and the different people that contribute different voices and notes to the song!!
that is a great comparision for life to be complete, we need the different pieces of contribution from everyone around us
i absolutely loved it!!