Good Love

Ahmad Cox · 8 hours ago

Good Love

Good love
Will last you
All your life
Good love
Will last you
Till the end of time
Love everlasting
Feeling that 
Good love
Moving 
In your soul
That Good love
That can bring
You to your knees
That Good love
That can break
Your soul
Make you 
Want to be better

Reviews

[Kyle Sky]

Good. you presented a poem so simply with such poise. The only thing I suggest is that you sould add more figurative language and symbolism in your poems. But I always love the theme and athmosphere of your poems.

[william keepers]

Good love, unconditional and eternal. Short on words yet deep in meaning is this one. Well done!

[Mia]

Ah this is lovely...wishing you lots of this kind of love...you definitely deserve it!

[scripted]

love this piece good love takes a good person

[Androglossia]

Love comes in so many different levels, that it doesn't appear to be the same emotion at all. So there could be two different types of love. Good and bad and since you have perfectly enumerated the qualities of a good love. So what's a bad love? Too much for something is bad. I guess too much love is bad love, yes?

[Ahmad Cox]

Thats actually a good thought. I guess when it turns into jealousy or obsession or it causes you to act out of anger out of a false sense of protecting the one you love or people that are in abusive relationships who don't really know how to get out.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

yes, i totally agree with this feeling, there is really Good love, and it`s everlasting, like the love to God, but also the Pure love to humans..we all are on this planet so short time, we have to realize many things...wonderful and honest poem, i wish to be everlasting!!
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[Gray Witch]

Very true and somewhat profound ..

[Bound In Red]

Very true and relatable if a person is in love. Wonderful write.