Hummingbird

Little hummingbird
I see you fly
Magical and free
Your flight
Is a true mystery
You fly and zip
Truly magical
Is your flight
A miracle wrapped up
In a little package
You hum along
Buzzing through life
Reminding us
Of what it means
To fly and to soar
And to zip along life
You are beautiful
Little hummingbird 
Show us your grace
And your spirit
And your joy
At a glance you 
Are there 
Then just
As soon 
As you come
You disappear 
Again 
As miraculous
And mysterious
As you entered

Reviews

[Lexi Nicole]

Excellent work! Hummingbirds really are interesting creatures, and this is a lovely study of them. We really can learn a lot from these little birds.

[Ahmad Cox]

I am a lover of hummingbirds myself

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

You give these everyday insects and creatures such a mystical feel... It's catchy. and not just clever. it's clear, the beauty you see in them. with your words you let us see the beauty as well.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. They are my spirit guides but there is matter and spirit and mystical meaning in all life but I wanted to give extra honor to the ones that have guided me the most in these past few months or so.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-Smith]

I believe the energy of life thrives in all things. I'm glad you agree.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. God and Mother and Spirit flow in and out of nature and the universe as well.

[william keepers]

I have watched many humming birds Ahmad, and you have described it very nicely. I could envision them as I read this. Good job!

[Mia]

Hummingbirds are incredible creatures and it is no wonder that they inspired such a lovely piece!!

[Gray Witch]

Beautiful...

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very beautiful, wonderful poem of mystery of every little being! hummingbirds are very special kind, they are so little, their flight is very gosammer, light, we feel as if they come just from fairyland! great, dear ahmad!
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[Ahmad Cox]

I wanted to write something special for the three main totems that have been showing up in my life

[Androglossia]

There is always something or someone that stimulates the mind or emotions to a high level. Something, that enlightens, that inspires. I think this is what it is all about. Good write. Thank you for sharing.

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad my poem could inspire you. I have been seeing hummingbirds a lot lately and even in my thoughts. Things tend to come in threes and I have been seeing the humminbird, the fairies, and the butterflies and so I wanted to write a poem to honor the hummingbird.

[Androglossia]

When we hear the birds call, my friend, a poem is about to start:)

[Ahmad Cox]

I like that thought. Thanks for sharing