I pray for peace Please allow your love To rain down on this earth We live in a time When people are becoming More separated Where people are hurting each other While people are hurting this planet People are lost and disjointed Without any type of connection To what reality truly means Living in an illusion Not understanding Their real worth And the ultimate reality We are all connected I pray that people Will begin to see And stop the wars And the judgment And the crimes And the pain And start understanding No life is ever forfeit For greed or gain And no life Is any less sacred Or has any less purpose Than any other life We must come to accept this Please I am asking you Wake up Whoever is out there Its not too late Even as crazy As the world is Its never too late to wake up Waking up to yourself Waking up and sensing The spirit that is inside But more importantly Being able to feel and to see The spirit inside of everything else Responding out of love and kindness Instead of hate and anger Learning to love in whole And complete ways And learning to show mercy And kindness to the people That need it the most I pray and plead Please wake up Its not too late We can still turn Things around There is still hope The choice Is with all of us
As Robin Williams put it in his tour 'Weapons of self destruction' "I think in 2012 we have just woken up from 'I don't give a sh** mode' and are realizing the damage we've done" I can see your point but most are just not up to anything anymore, our world is running dry on hope and waiting for the next great apocalypse but we don't want to do anything for it to come. 'I despise your apocalyptic society'-Nightwish, Song of myself Nice writing, sounds a bit like 'Watching, as I lay dying' If you wanna check it out ^^ I will say it seems as if you write tons of poetry. Not a bad thing but I feel writing pondered can be better concentrated. jus' saying ^.< Thanx for writing and well done! I enjoyed reading.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Well I guess for me I have been able to see and feel how many people have actually been waking up to.. read moreWell I guess for me I have been able to see and feel how many people have actually been waking up to the same truths and for me there was a period when I wasn't writing that often but then there seemed to be a period when it seemed and felt like I just began to pour forth all of these different poems that a lot of times when I was done even I was surprised by the ideas and thoughts that came out but I do know that I have written quite a bit but a lot of it was during my more sensitive and open days and I tend not to write 4 or 5 or even 6 poems at a time a day. Its more like 2 every time and maybe a week or so but it was during that period where a lot of my poems came from.
Not understanding Their real worth/ for when we realize just how precious we are, how life is, everything else melts away. It really does!
Its never too late to wake up
Waking up to yourself
Waking up and sensing
The spirit that is inside
You re pretty prophetic, my friend
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you. I wrote this during my earlier more fertile poetic stages but its amazing to see how some.. read moreThank you. I wrote this during my earlier more fertile poetic stages but its amazing to see how some of my earlier more prophetic minded poems I wrote some time last year are becoming even more true today.
As Mia said, this is an uplifting write and it is important to realize that everyone can change the world be changing yourself for good. And being happy with yourself.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Yep as Ghandi says you are the light you want to see in the world. We have to come together if we ar.. read moreYep as Ghandi says you are the light you want to see in the world. We have to come together if we are truly going to progress.
these are my favorite types of poems the ones that touch my heart the ones that have much meaning LOVED IT!!! thanks for sharing
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
No problem. I am glad you liked it. I know that I wanted to write something that would speak for wha.. read moreNo problem. I am glad you liked it. I know that I wanted to write something that would speak for what is going on today.
My name is Ahmad and I have posted a lot of my poetry on hellopoetry.com but I wanted to check out this site and see if I can start posting and reading poetry here. more..