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This is a song I wrote a while ago.

Ahmad Cox · Jul 22, 2011

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These people here today
They need a place to stay
They have nowhere to go
Nowhere to call their home
And so we must pray
That they will find a way
Back home
Back home
They'll find a way back home
Back home
Back home
A place where they can be
Back home
Back home
A place where they can be
Free
Free
Free
I know they cant find a home
And so they'll always roam
Away from where you are
They'll roam ever far
So that's why we must pray
That they will find a way
Back home
Back home
They'll find their way back home
Back home
Back home
A place where they can be
Back home 
Back home
A place where they can be
Free
Free
Free
There's a sun in the sky
There's a moon up above
And yet we all find ways
To deny God's love
Moving ever far
Moving ever away
From our home in the sky
With this home filled with love
So we must be willing to
Find our way back home
Because if we don't 
We will stay alone
Alone 
Alone 
Alone
We must find a way
For our hearts to stay
So that they will never roam
And we can find a home
Back home
Back home
We'll find a way back home
Back home
Back home
A place where we can be
Back home
Back home
A place where we can be
Free
Free 
Free
Free

Reviews

[Felecia]

Great song type poem! I love it. It's warm and touching and just all around great!

[Kyle Sky]

Really great. There was so much value in the meaning and the meaning was greatly expressed.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

it`s lovely and wonderful and touching song-poem! what I can feel is relation between freedom, happiness, home and God..we are all children of God, we need to be free at our home, but the wars turn our way from God...Our real home is the planet we live on! that why your poem sounds so touching. It reminds me also for all these poor people who wander without home, bcs of the force of war in Syria...May God take care of them!
nour~

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could see the full deep meanings in my song.

[Maria ♥]

I love the meaning in this, makes me think. It's beautiful.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[scripted]

love the rythym

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[Mary]

Really good write, Ahmad! I love the repetition of the single words like free.. alone... back home. They provide emphasis. Do you plan on putting this to music?

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. It does actually. It is an actual song. I am glad you liked it