Some people Can take a back seat When it comes to Their own lives Sitting in the back Not really taking any Responsibility Or taking any actions In their lives Allowing people to run them Giving up control of their lives To everyone else but themselves Not really knowing How to take charge How to take responsibility For their own lives And their own actions
A very dreadful thought Ahmad, but well written. Some are content to take a backseat and some are not, and yes, it can even lead to avoiding responsibility. Then again, there are also those who like to drive and avoid responsibility when they get in a crash, but this is not about them. This is very tight and to the point Ahmad, message is loud and clear. Well done!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I am glad you could receive the lesson hidden inside.
your poems make me think much about myslef..if I do that, to let another people rule my life? even they can`t but in same time I dont rule it myself enough too...I always love to give , to help another, in one moment I dont realize where I am..maybe I could be lost this way..and I never want to be...very wise poem too!
thank u...
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I used to be someone who let others run my life, but now that I am a mother, I have had to realize that I need to take control of my life to make my daughters life better. There is so much that I really wonder about, but I don't regret what I have done in the past because it's made me realize I needed to take control of my own life before letting my daughter experience the feeling of letting someone else having all the control over who she is and who she might become.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Its amazing how life has a way of using our past experiences and issues to help us understand a litt.. read moreIts amazing how life has a way of using our past experiences and issues to help us understand a little and ultimately teach us about ourselves in the process
11 Years Ago
I do agree about that. I think there is always way that we can learn even more from out past if we j.. read moreI do agree about that. I think there is always way that we can learn even more from out past if we just have the courage to look back and find our errors.
Very true. Some people don't have a clue. Or maybe they are just too immature to accept responsibility or just plain cowardice. Your poem speaks of life and as always, it gives inspiration to others. This is a very thoughtful peace and a good one. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you for your positive reviews I appreciate your poetry as well
My name is Ahmad and I have posted a lot of my poetry on hellopoetry.com but I wanted to check out this site and see if I can start posting and reading poetry here. more..