I think that its very arrogant For some people to believe That we are somehow better than Or greater than any other animal Or any living organism on this planet We all live and exist just the same Floating on the same beautiful ball That we all call home Everything has a spirit You can not separate spirit from matter So to say that animals don't have a soul Or don't have a spirit I believe is a very arrogant statement It denies them the spark and spirit And ultimately denies the fact that they Are living breathing beings just like us' I don't believe that we were put here To subjugate the fields and the animals We were meant to live in harmony with The other living things on this planet And to live in harmony with ourselves as well Learning from each other Existing in harmony with the planet Not against it In the effort of trying to tame the wild We have ultimately destroyed Our planet in the process I believe that we need to get back to the natural way Living in communion with each other And living in communion with every living thing That is on this wonderful Beautiful blue ball We call Earth And we all call home
this is a theme i often ponder. you have expressed, quite well, many of my internal doctrines and beliefs. if every living thing has a spirit, a soul, then every living thing is also a consumer of souls in one way or another. excuse the pun but, there is food for thought. well done.
yes, totally true! I love the idea to live in harmony with all nature and animals...everyone who claims to be greater than little animal, or creature, or anyone who torture it, should be sure, the cicle will come back to him, the next stage! everything is connected and returning many times..so the spirit is real in all nature! very lovely poem for peace!
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this is a theme i often ponder. you have expressed, quite well, many of my internal doctrines and beliefs. if every living thing has a spirit, a soul, then every living thing is also a consumer of souls in one way or another. excuse the pun but, there is food for thought. well done.
Ahmad, this is realy good! I agree with you entirely. Animals do have soul and no, we are certianly not better then them. I think that they are in fact better then us for they tend to behave in a manner they were created to do. We do not. I truly believe that mankind was created to serve and protect the Earth, not plunder and hoard It's riches. Arrogance is not bliss, it's stupidity... Thanks for writing this Ahmad!
yes, I agree with William. However, from a poetic standpoint, this reads more like a personal essay.. read moreyes, I agree with William. However, from a poetic standpoint, this reads more like a personal essay to me.
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Yeah, you may be right Eglantine, though I do believe Ahmad's intention is very poetic.
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the intention, yes, the execution, I have to say not so much
I agree a bit with this, especially when it comes to animal cruelty. It's just sick...
But, we do eat some of the animal's for food..like cows and stuff. You don't happen to be a vegitarian do you?
Anyway, I agree with this, again, especially when it comes to animal cruelty.
Very well done.
absolutely agree with you!! i have been reading these books from the past, they illustrate the world you are talking about here...!!
a great write and thanxx for sharing!
My name is Ahmad and I have posted a lot of my poetry on hellopoetry.com but I wanted to check out this site and see if I can start posting and reading poetry here. more..