The cave

There is a cave down below
That is waiting to be discovered
There is a cave filled with peril
But there are hidden treasures inside
There is a cavern
A ravine that has a special source
That springs up once we have
Discovered it
It is the spririt that 
Lies in all of our souls
The spirit that flows
If we know where to find it
Giving forth its riches
To all who are willing to seek

Reviews

[Jo March]

Very pretty, lovely imagery

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice one, I really like the ending:
"It is the spririt that
Lies in all of our souls
The spirit that flows
If we know where to find it
Giving forth its riches
To all who are willing to seek"

[J. Write]

This flows really well. Nice work!

[Sunny Skye]

Yes! And its just screaming for thou to notice. Great poem!

[Ahmad Cox]

I had a feeling you would like this one

[Sunny Skye]

Yep you know me :D

[Ahmad Cox]

Well even though we have never met there I feel like we have been able to form a strong friendship and connection and I can generally feel and sense things about the people that I have loving connections with. Even if its a while until we contact each other again I am always thinking about you and sending out my angels to watch after you and sending positive energy your way

[Sunny Skye]

Aww thank you that's so sweet :D I always do the same i actually ask more for others then i do for myself and i rearly ask for myself matter fact. But i appreciate it and i really hope yor doing well :D

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am the same way. When I pray I am usually praying for healing for the world and for the people I love and care for

[Sunny Skye]

Excatly I do the same and sometimes even people i just saw in the street struggling is always a good thing to ask for others then for yourself