Alert

Alert

We feel at alert
Every day
We are 
Bombared
By life
We are
Bombarded
On every
Side
Its easy
To get lost
Losing
Our way
As we
Move along
We need
To learn
How to 
Live in peace
Turning off
Our alert
Our alarms
Learning
How not
To feel so
Bombarded
Learning
How to 
Float along
Letting life
Float around
You
So that 
You can 
Actually
Rest

       

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[Barbara Walker]

That's the perfect word-bombarded! Very strong image!

[Steven Cash]

nice again man

[Sunny Skye]

Nicely done. I like the choice of words and it has a great message as always. Good job!

-SkyeBlanco

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Awesome write and great message =)

[Mia]

Great job :) as always!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Wow... I love this and the flow of the structure, easy to read, straight to the point. I love the meaning in this with life and just taking a breath to slow down and relax. So relatable too. Very nice write, enjoyed this a lot.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I have really enjoyed your poetry so far as well. You have a very open and sensual style and unique use of imagery that I appreciate. I am looking forward to reading more poetry as you post it. Feel free to add me as a friend that way I can send you different poems I think you might appreciate.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You are very welcome. And thank you.

[Ahmad Cox]

I sent you some poems I think you might appreciate as well

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Will read them. :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Thanks. :)