Rising and Falling

Ahmad Cox · Jan 13

Rising and Falling

We all fall
We all rise
We are all subject
To the flowing ebb of time
We all have our moments
When we feel the most content
When we feel like life 
Is just where it is supposed to be
There are time in our lives
When we feel lost
And when we feel like all is lost
And when we feel like we don't know
Which way is up or down
When we can feel 
Like life doesn't really make any sense
When we are searching 
For answers out in the rain
When we are searching for ourselves
And when we need to start again
But we all have these moments
They are just a part of life
We just have to be willing
To seek
To love
To grow
And continuing to to move forward
Through the good times and the bad

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Exactly how life is.

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could appreciate the deeper meaning behind it and be able to apply it to life.

[Mia]

I like this :)
I will disagree with you on one thing...we do all fall but not all of us rise. I think that’s what separates the hopeful from the hopeless.

[Ahmad Cox]

Good point

[Bewitching Sensations]

yes again the cycle of life.. just roll with it .. it will all work out :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep, sometimes we need to fall to truly fly

[EvErEyEs]

very deep
great job

[Ahmad Cox]

I really enjoy your poetry as well. :)

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

This is written really well. A very hopeful piece. I like the theme, the truths of up's and down's of life. Great job

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep, life is a lesson that is best taught on your toes and ready to move

[NicoDaDon]

True Flow....

[Ahmad Cox]

I really appreciate it.

[Kenaz]

Nicely written. When you have love you are never truly lost. We all do have our ups and downs, but is important to find the equilibrium.
-Kenaz

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you liked it.

[Cerise]

A very good point...loved it..whatever happens you have to keep moving that's life..:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep

[Steven Cash]

:) true

[Bumble]

Amazing poem! I love the flow and structure. :D