Helpful

Helpful

Its good to be helpful
Its nice to give back
Whenever you can
Sometimes being a little helpful
Can mean the difference
In someone else's day
Sometimes something as simple
As sharing a little time
A little extra energy
Taking that little extra effort
To be a little more helpful
Can have huge effects
For the people
Who are receiving your kindness
And who you are being helpful to

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

I like this piece, Ahmed, however, I think the last line interferes with the flow and isn't necessary. Just my thoughts.

[Sunny Skye]

Excatly! And the best help is to help and ask for nothing in return, the payment you get for helping withought asking for anything in return is the beautiful smile and the happiness of that person you just helped even do it might be a stranger. Good Job, i enjoyed it.

-SkyeBlanco

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Spreading waves of positivity and love through kindness.

[Sunny Skye]

Excatly, the best help. You never know you might have changed that persons life for just doing a small favor that might seem like nothing but to them was huge

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Even I have found that to be true. People have run back into me and let me know that they appreciated me helping them even though for me it didn't really seem like that big of a deal.

[Sunny Skye]

Yep same here even if its helping someone with their grocery bags it might not be a big deal but for them it is to know such kind people and to know we might have made their day.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep, I love knowing I am making a positive difference in people's lives. It makes me happy

[Sunny Skye]

I feel the same way this is how we get paid back, the satisfaction of knowing we just helped someone out and might have changed them in a positive way its a great feeling.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Its just sad that so many people don't realize its so much better to give and to offer yourself to others in positive ways rather than trying to take or force or steal for what they want.

[Sunny Skye]

Excatly, i have a family member that he helps you out but he always wants something in return, he is so blinded and my dad and i have tried to open his eyes yet he calls my dad crazy and he was just sinking us down so is sad to say but we had to move away from him because it sucks to know he was never going to change, i mean even if it was right on his face he would not notice and its terrible to know how many people there is out there that are just like that.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep, the bible saying about not seeing the plank in your own eye really does apply.

[Sunny Skye]

Excatly

[Ahmad Cox]

Its amazing how many lessons you can learn in there that really do apply even today if you just take the time to understand what the words really mean.

[Ahmad Cox]

Oh did you get the poem I sent you called rising and falling

[Sunny Skye]

Yea, very true but some people don't take the time. Thank god i've taken the time to try to understand

[Allycat]

Wonderful! :D It's so true, I love helping people out, a little bit of help can go a long way

[Soul Fire]

This describes me and my personality. I like to give back. Excellent poem.

[Mia]

So true and it’s so delightful to be helpful, it lifts your spirits. Well penned Ahmad!

[Cerise]

Vry nicely said...its true that a lil extra tym can mean alot this days where everyone is busy with thr new gadgets....a few minutes of talk has also more value..well done..:D

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Every connection no matter how big or small has a value and worth.

[Steven Cash]

so true
i was thinking about this the other day

[Ahmad Cox]

A little kindness goes a long way.

[Cynthia Man]

A lot of times small things matters a lot to us, and people who get affected by another one's help.... It means a lot...
Great:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you