The god in you

The god in you

A Poem by Ahmad Cox

The god in you

There is a little God in everyone.
There is a little god
Inside of you
God is just waiting
For you to accept that. 
We all have a choice
We have accept it
It cant be forced
But once you see
The god in you
And in everyone
Nothing
Will ever
Be the same

© 2012 Ahmad Cox


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This is beautiful! I don't think we can help but be a better person when we see God in ourselves and others. nicely written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the first three lines the best because of their metrical quality. The problem for me is that the very next line, the fourth one, demands almost a religious devotion, when in fact it might be better to let this unfold as a description of individual will, with subtle religious undertones.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sunny Skye

12 Years Ago

Amen. :P
Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

Thank you. I am glad you understand
Sunny Skye

12 Years Ago

As always lol
So God created man in his own image, in the image of God he created him; male and female he created them. The body reflects God's image by first of all being one in substance. God as a trinity is one being, acting with as much unity as our soul acts with our body. Each of us is sacred and every bit the likeness of God. This is a very thoughtful write which reminds us of our responsibility as human.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful and beautiful insight. It is so true
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Namaste. This is very good i like it and it's true everyone has a little god in them they just have to stop and listen. And if you don't know what Namaste is ill inbox you. Nice poem, good job!

-SkyeBlanco

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sunny Skye

12 Years Ago

Yep it means the god in me says hello to the god in you basically.
Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

Yep. I see it in you as well.
Sunny Skye

12 Years Ago

Glad you do, i can tell you are very strong towards god as well
This is fantastic and so true :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

I had a feeling you might be able to appreciate this one.
very nice, and I like how you explained it as 'God Potential'. You have to realize/unlock it
its something people have and never really realize unfortunately

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very well done (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


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"But once you see
The god in you
And in everyone"
Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very true..somewhere inside you know there is god helping you through everythng and he helps you alwayz through everythng..marvelluous..:D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

Yep. He is the one that drives everything in this world and without him we would be lost. It is beca.. read more

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Added on September 23, 2012
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Ahmad Cox
Ahmad Cox

San Jose, CA



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