Blown out

 

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Ahmad Cox · May 25

Blown out

Blown out
Washed up
Torn down
Torn asunder
Laid to ruin
Laid bare
Laid out
Torn out
Destroyed
Conquered
Demolished
Smashed
Assaulted
Pushed aside
Pushed down
Stepped on
Feeling low
Feeling trapped
Feeling scared
Feeling alone
Getting out
Feeling lost 
Our souls know
What it is
To fear
What our souls
Is really craving for
Is love

Reviews

[Sunny Skye]

Wow! Excellent poem. I love it and i have felt this so many times. Which sucks but it makes us stronger right. Thank you for the excellent piece.

-SkyeBlanco

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. And when you finally get to that peace it makes it that much sweeter.

[Sunny Skye]

Excatly. Good poem