Ice

Ice

by Ahmad Cox

Ice chills you to the bone

Sucks away life

Sucks away energy

Entropy in action

Moving from one phase to the next

It pushes

It glides

It falls

It pours

It shapes

Creating whole landscapes

With its frozen hardness

Each snowflake is like a little life

Clinging to its existence

Trying to live as it plummets

Plummets ever quicker to the ground

Melting as it shifts from one phase to the next

Snowy life reborn

Moving from one phase to the next

Moving and rolling as it cascades

Fills the landscape with a sense of wonder

And awe at nature's majesty

Pristine glory on display

Every ice crystal

Every snowflake

Unique from any other

Life's random chaotic beauty on display

As it continue to fall till it lives no more

Reviews

[Allycat]

"ife's random chaotic beauty on display
As it continue to fall till it lives no more"

Wonderful! I love how you ended this piece :D Thank you for sharing

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you liked it