The rain

Ahmad Cox · 27 minutes ago

The rain

The rain can come
Be ready
Sometimes the rain
Can come in bursts
Drowning everything
Washing away
Everything
In it's path
But its when that rain comes
That life can really grow
Washing away everything
To let life prosper
In its wake
A mist 
A rain
Can be 
A good thing
We need the rain sometimes
To help make things
New again

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

I love how much you think like Vikings =D They said exactly that ! Water (in this case - rain) purify, gives life and restore :)
I loved your poem =D

[Barbara Walker]

I'm not real fond of it myself, only because it makes my chronic pain worse! I can predict rain 3-4 days before hand. More reliable than the weatherperson!

[Ahmad Cox]

Likewise. I get crampy when its overcast

[Steven Cash]

I don't like rain. :)

[Falling Leaf.]

A great description of rain. Superb.

Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah

[Ahmad Cox]

I wanted to really describe something natural in a more spiritual way

[Amanda]

Great job. I think you described it perfectly

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad