The way

The way

The way is kindness
The way is truth
The way is honesty
They way is peace
The way is love
The way is light
The way is mercy
The way is grace
Loving people
No matter what
Learning to honor 
The life
In every one
And everything else

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Remember what I've said in the last review? IDEM !
Also, let me add: Great use of anaphora ! It makes a great effect both visually and on a pathos level :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Ironically enough I don't know what an anaphora is. :)

[外人 (Gaijin)]

oh, that's easy ;)
It's just the repetition of one (or more) words; in this poem the anaphora is "the way"

[Ahmad Cox]

Learn something new everyday.

[Barbara Walker]

It's so sad that so many can't/won't see the path.

[Ahmad Cox]

More people are waking up to this

[Steven Cash]

The way is great!

[Amanda]

Nice job

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[Brandon S. Whitten]

The only way to live in harmony, the way we should be living and hope to live someday. Excellent read and write.

[Ahmad Cox]

More people are waking up to this

[Falling Leaf.]

This is really amazing! I only found one spelling hiccup: "They way is peace." The*
Nevertheless a tremendous piece. I'm awarding you 98/100

Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank for letting me know