The Universe(Haiku)

The Universe(Haiku)

The whole universe
And everything in between
Is inside us all

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

That's an interesting concept, it has been said several time in history, actually;
Viking mythology states our universe took place from the body of a giant, Yimir;
Marsiglio Ficcino, an italian philosopher, stated all human beings have a universe inside them that resembles the macro-universe where we live :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. I truly perceive and believe it. Those vikings were pretty smart.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

ahahahaha, people usually think they were uncivilized while they had a wonderful civilization

[Ahmad Cox]

I know right. Those crazy barbarians. Got to love them.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Me too !!!!! =D Right now I'm like "I wanna know EVERYTHING about their culture"

[Kenaz]

This sounds like the Wyrd. The web that connects all things, together and separate.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Grandmother spider connects her webs inbetween space time and connects the past and present and the heavens and the earth. Threading her web and connecting our hearts.

[Ahmad Cox]

Its amazing how much our spiritual paths have intersected

[Kenaz]

Yeah...

[Barbara Walker]

This says so much in so few words and that is difficult to do. Great write!

[Sirius King]

another great one,,,,the universe is energy and we all are energy
Law: energy cannot be created or destroyed, which means we are forever and the possibilities are endless

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. I am glad you understand the deeper truth behind the poem

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Thankful somone is getting it. Excellent write:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep, everything we need is all inside of you

[Steven Cash]

Life force you mean?

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. Good job young padi-won

[Steven Cash]

*bows* Thank you, Master Ahmad.

lol yea, everything in this world has enegry. Energy, life force, spirit, whatever you call it

[Ahmad Cox]

Understanding you have. In this world, well will you do.

[Steven Cash]

You are Yoda?

*faints*

[Ahmad Cox]

Shh. Don't want anyone to know. i am supposed to be dead :)

[Steven Cash]

With all due respect, you took quite a while to die in Star Wars. I mean, all that whispering about 'your sister'. it took 5 mins.

Just do like they do on TV, "YOU ARE NOT THE FATHER!"

[Ahmad Cox]

I know. It was George Lucas fault. But I am glad I dodged that bullet on that one. Can you imagine how horrible of a plot twist they would have had to add in if they had decided to make me the father

[Steven Cash]

Hmm I suppose so
Well ttyl Yoda

[Amanda]

This makes me think for some reason. Keep writing

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad it could make you think. Everything everyone ever needs is already inside. You just have to know where to look.