The beast(Haiku)

The beast(Haiku)

There's a beast inside
Waiting to swallow our souls
Do not let it win

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Deep and interesting, I believe we all can relate to this ;)
Great poem

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am still battling it but I have learned to live with and incorporate my shadow side instead of fighting it.

[Kenaz]

Indeed, I do believe this relates back to the Great Red Dragon no? An evil that wants to take the light from us, but we must fight to keep it at bay. Very nice.

[Barbara Walker]

The life long battle against good and evil, well said here.

[Junert]

I won't.

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad

[Steven Cash]

The evil inside

Hatred, it works to kill us

Fight the hate with love

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I will post that actually

Great job Ahmad!

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you appreciated it

[Sirius King]

love it!

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[Amanda]

I think this is my favorite of your haiku's because it relates to everyone.nGreat job

[Ahmad Cox]

Glad to hear