Touch

Touch

A Poem by Ahmad Cox

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Touch can be very important
We all need to be touched
We all need to feel like we are beautiful
In our own ways
Learning to embrace our selves
Embracing the warmth
That can come with a simple touch
With a simple hug
I don't think we allow ourselves to be touched enough
We spend so much time guarding ourselves
We have spent so much time demeaning ourselves
Demeaning our bodies 
Sexualizing ourselves
Demonizing touch
Even demonizing our bodies
Ultimately repressing ourselves
We need to be able to allow ourselves to be more open to touching
And hugging
And just spending time
Connecting in intimate and healing ways

© 2012 Ahmad Cox


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Yes, we need to touch and be touched.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like the meaning, that especially shows in the ending lines:
"We need to be able to allow ourselves to be more open to touching
And hugging
And just spending time
Connecting in intimate and healing ways"
I like how you pick out the way people act compared to they way we should act like more in life:
"We spend so much time guarding ourselves"
Really nice write.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

Thank you. This was a series of poems that I wrote to explore about sexual and gender issues we have.. read more
So very true! And we must inform those who are freaking out at the word intimate, that that does not have to mean sexually! There homework is to go back and read the words, "healing ways."

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

Yep. We can connect with people in healing and loving ways that don't have to be sexual or even roma.. read more
Woah. Like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

Thank you
aww so sweet ...great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it
Great job, makes the reader think.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahmad Cox

12 Years Ago

Thank you
You are so right and this is a great philosophy!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Unfortunately so. just as something can be positive it also has the possibility to be destructive as well

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sirius King

12 Years Ago

we jus have to be brave enough to take that risk
very true,, to allow ur self to be touched is to leave ur self vulnerable, a touch can heal but it also has the power to hurt

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on September 4, 2012
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Ahmad Cox
Ahmad Cox

San Jose, CA



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