Thinking

Thinking

Thinking
Can sometimes
Get me in trouble
Thinking
Can be the thing
That gets in the way
Of the feeling
But sometimes
I have to let go
And just allow myself to feel

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

I think this would sound better if you changed the word, "But" to "So". Very nice write! The heart and the mind; so many times they can be at odds with each other.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you

[Junert]

I love this.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yeah this a constant issue for me

[Steven Cash]

hmmm... i need to think about this one

aha lol jk nice job

[Amanda]

I really like this, great job. I have a problem with with over-thinking, so I can relate.