When the Girl is Silent

When the Girl is Silent

A Poem by Ahleen Embel
"

The girl that never talk about the problems

"
The Silent Girl'
She watched the day and night passes her
She wont speake her problems
The Silent Girl
Shes Lost in her own world
Her mind run so fast with her heart beat

The Silent Girl'
Her world is upside down
She cries just to see tomrrow
She doesn't wanna share her problems
The Silent Girl
She feels trapped 

The Silent Girl
Her problems are hers Only
She cuts herself to slower the pain
The Silent Girl
No one feels nor know her pain
The Silent Girl
The only Hope is surviving another Day
*silent*let her sleep now'
The Silent Girl'

© 2018 Ahleen Embel


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Unfortunately, impulse control and tension release often go hand in hand... having someone to talk with can be a great help.... my review predecessor Christine also makes some very valid points..... nice write tho and I guess it had to be said..... Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ahleen Embel

6 Years Ago

thankyou for the reading and valid points :)
Neville

6 Years Ago

my pleasure entirely.... N
Inner pain can create turmoil inside, sometimes you need to break that silence, to talk and trust someone to listen. Talking can be a good form of release. Keep writing, channel your energy into being creative.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahleen Embel

6 Years Ago

thank you Christine
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.
and sometimes she prefer solitude to a crowd.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ahleen Embel

6 Years Ago

yes she does and shes alone in the mist of the crowd.

thanks for the ewview

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Added on April 26, 2018
Last Updated on April 26, 2018
Tags: Life and Struggles

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Ahleen Embel
Ahleen Embel

Port Moresby, Papua New Guinea, Papua New Guinea



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Hi. My name is Ahleen Embel i love writing short stories about life experience from actual facts and imagination going wild a little. more..

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