Dads are Daughters First Love

Dads are Daughters First Love

A Poem by Ahleen Embel
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My Dad is my World. My best Teacher about Life.

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My Dad is My World
Daughters First love at first sight
The bond of the first born daughter
The love is unconditional of any other love

The feathers that i got from my dad
The male version of him that smile and face structures,
That moment my dad says one word all my pain go away and tears dry
The man that sharp and make me the woman i am today
Seeing the gray and white hair on his head,
means he has done the best role in life bringing me up since birth

I will forever owe my Dad and still will always
First born kids are their fathers pride and always the first Love
My Dad i love you so much and i will always till death do us apart
This is for you my daddy forever the best dad in the world.




        

© 2018 Ahleen Embel


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Heart warming love between daughter and father. I know it. I was firstborn of five, sadly lost my Dad when he was 60. For the last 28 years I have felt robbed of him. He died too soon. He remains in my thoughts and I can still feel his presence at times. Lovely tribute to your wonderful Dad. A very pleasant read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahleen Embel

6 Years Ago

awww thankyou for your comment and losing a dad its so heart breaking..we first born daughters love .. read more
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

I also write poetry about mine. I have written January Shadows and Stones. Both about him. I expect .. read more
Ahleen Embel

6 Years Ago

I will go read your story and i wanna see some more good stories from you.



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a fitting tribute to your dad interesting read

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ahleen Embel

6 Years Ago

yes me too i am..being the first born... :)
sette

6 Years Ago

me too first born and only girl
Ahleen Embel

6 Years Ago

wow thats cool...me i have 3 more other siblings after me...
Heart warming love between daughter and father. I know it. I was firstborn of five, sadly lost my Dad when he was 60. For the last 28 years I have felt robbed of him. He died too soon. He remains in my thoughts and I can still feel his presence at times. Lovely tribute to your wonderful Dad. A very pleasant read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahleen Embel

6 Years Ago

awww thankyou for your comment and losing a dad its so heart breaking..we first born daughters love .. read more
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

I also write poetry about mine. I have written January Shadows and Stones. Both about him. I expect .. read more
Ahleen Embel

6 Years Ago

I will go read your story and i wanna see some more good stories from you.

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Added on April 25, 2018
Last Updated on April 25, 2018
Tags: Dad, Family, Love

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Ahleen Embel
Ahleen Embel

Port Moresby, Papua New Guinea, Papua New Guinea



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Hi. My name is Ahleen Embel i love writing short stories about life experience from actual facts and imagination going wild a little. more..

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