2 Olives

2 olives

“Mr. and Mrs. Olives”

Strangers we have heard on high

coming close he becomes mine           

I say this with a sigh     

but Mrs. Ginger married the guy

No more Ginger now Oliver

I say so with a strange quiver

Locked up in a room they sit             

no socializing, not even a bit                                         

inside I peep, see a candle lit                  

and a big pumpkin that seems bit

“Mr. and Mrs. Olives it says

on the door since the past few days                                 

both seems happy and pretty gay                              

they are honeymooning in may

A descent couple they don’t smoke    

no drinks, says the old bloke       

sit around, little they joke                          

just some tea not even coke

Mr. and Mrs. Oliver     

the best couple ever           

since times never                                  

I say so with a shiver 

Ahena Mk 

Reviews

[A. Amos]

This is really well done:) great work

[Ahena MK]

Glad you liked it ... ;) l

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is really cute. Enjoyed the read. ^-^

[Ahena MK]

Thank you ... ;)

[Frieda P]

Entertaining, an adorable read...they sound kind of boring though. ha....enjoyed!

[Ahena MK]

Ya the couple are slightly boring ,.... Thanks for reading :)

[Frieda P]

Those are always the ones you have to watch out for, they're probaby honeymooning in a nudist camp...ha ;-)

[Ahena MK]

Hahaha .... Maybe ...

[Vidya Bacchus]

A very fun and adorable poem Ahena :)

[Ahena MK]

Thank you ... ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[wordman]

sounds like two shy people on a honeymoon not yet touched by lifes down falls

[Ahena MK]

Hahaha .... You can say that ... Thanks for reading :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the sense of fun here, good job.

[Ahena MK]

Thank you .... :)

[KeeD]

cute poem and i always loved the old couple from up!

[Ahena MK]

Me too... Thanks for reading ;)

[mahima]

Good thought ahena! Nice personification :)

[Ahena MK]

shaw that to vandana maam !!! ...
thanks :)
ahena

[mahima]

Very funny haha....

[Ahena MK]

no seriously .....