The Fountain of GOD

The fountain of god 

 

The fountain of god 

That begins at the lock

Brings purity from the top

Spreading love till the dock

 

Across the nations people fly 

Leaving everything in their life

From their children and beloved wives

To the fountain of god they fly 

 

A holy dip to take 

Like god's hand they shake 

Another birth, they awake 

Their past sins now fake 

 

Into the river some often throw 

Money for the gods to row 

Their love for holy to show 

How humble they are, really low 

 

Across the river the money flow 

In the water the money glow 

All the poor across the shore 

Run in to get a bucket more 

 

Into the water a bags they hold

All the money, for those it's gold 

No need to work and get things sold 

Thanks to the fountain as the god told 

                                   - Ahena MK 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo. Where is this amazing artwork located? I like the energy and the thoughts/places you took me in the poem. Some places in our world are holy and we could find some sort of peace near them. Thank you for sharing the amazing poem and photo.
Coyote

[Ahena MK]

i am not very sure about the location, the website said it was computer graphics .... glad you liked the journey !!

[Scott Metro]

An excellent spiritual journey.
Very descriptive..

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Ahena MK]

Glad you enjoyed it...

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott....

[Sami Khalil]

Thoughtful , spiritual, wonderful...:)............

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it !!

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You are welcome...:)...............

[Saddam]

Beautiful flow of words for a big historic and faithful place. I had read about it but so clear through your poem. Thank you for holy dip from your poem.

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it !!!

[Giggling Star]

Thought provoking write Ahena. Where did this come from? Something you saw or heard? What triggered this write, I wonder.

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it.... saw it in my dream actually :)

[Giggling Star]

Always interesting to see where the muse has appeared ... ;)

[Ahena MK]

hahaha thanks for reading ...

[Frieda P]

I really like this one Ahena, it has a strong presence on your page, nicely pen'd.

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it ..

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure :-)

[Leslie Philibert]

A good poem. It is usual to capitalise God, unless you want to use the plural.

[Ahena MK]

thank you ...

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is lovely Ahena truly lovely :)

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)