An alien in my blood

An alien in my blood 

 

Why life is so shut 

And dreams are more than but,

Where the things outside the nut

Are untamed and uncut 

 

An alien in my blood 

Where emotions filled by flood

And footsteps marked on mud 

Stories break from bud 

 

Where ideas reach the sky

And thoughts go up high 

When no person is shy 

To let out no lie 

 

                           - Ahena MK 

Reviews

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A very lovely, interesting write. Wonderful! Thank you for sharing.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!

[Saddam]

Where ideas reach the sky
And thoughts go up high
When no person is shy
To let out no lie
a freedom song is this, my think is this, very lovely lets find.
very lovely one.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading .. glad you liked it !

[Saddam]

thanks dear...

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem a lot and the metaphor of an alien in your blood...Bravo...................

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Giggling Star]

Excellent poem Ahena. Apparently you were pondering the age old question "where the heck did that come from????"

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!

[Frieda P]

Oh a freaky pic, wasn't expecting it when I first came upon this one...ha, quirky kind of poem, like the notion behind it, sounds like a good place to be where ideas reach the sky. ;-)

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!! glad i passed on a freaky pic !! :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, it woke me right up! ;-)