An alien in my blood

An alien in my blood 

 

Why life is so shut 

And dreams are more than but,

Where the things outside the nut

Are untamed and uncut 

 

An alien in my blood 

Where emotions filled by flood

And footsteps marked on mud 

Stories break from bud 

 

Where ideas reach the sky

And thoughts go up high 

When no person is shy 

To let out no lie 

 

                           - Ahena MK 

Reviews

[mahima]

Truely a different topic to enjoy. Nice poem ahena.....

[Ahena MK]

Thx ..

[costa siwale]

A good piece, kinda lyrical. Enjoyed it

[Ahena MK]

thanks ...

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the poem...the picture reminds me of my children..

[Ahena MK]

hahaha !!! nice one ...
thanks for reading !!!

[m.s.early]

A very unique voice in this one, friend :)

[Ahena MK]

thank you friend :)

[AYVID N]

An alien in my blood!

I truly enjoyed this different and novel writing from you Ahena!

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it :)

[s y e]

Ahena, this is amazing, I really enjoyed this one. Every single line was amazing.

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it!!!

[writ rajat]

I think that poems are hidden in your blood, extremely modern thought that no one had except you

[Ahena MK]

thank you !! thanks for reading !

[Rita L. Sev]

Sort of like, your Muse is from Mars... This is an interesting concept, Ahena!

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Praveeta]

"Where ideas reach the sky
And thoughts go up high
When no person is shy
To let out no lie"

Lovely write Ahena.

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!

[Scott Metro]

Interesting stuff...
There IS an alien in you..

Scott

[Ahena MK]

thanks !!..

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott......