BONDED

“And it's hard to hate someone once you understand them.” ― Lucy Christopher

BONDED 

 

Unsavory prize be me 

Forgiveness for she

My only desire, sail free

 

Darkness in the time

My throat scraped in lime 

All life's become a mime

Where days have no rhyme 

 

Shackles of bondage

Strives there savage

Where sadness contage

From the Dark Age

               - Ahena MK 

Author's Note

contage- contagious

Reviews

[mahima]

Very nicely penned Ahena!

[LadyAnn68]

I do like this one! Very very imaginative!

[Ahena MK]

Thank you ..

[Dhaye]

Understanding is the bond between two persons.
This is an exceptional piece of writing.
Great!

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!!

[DIVYA]

In this perfect writing, you have told the story of every woman, including me. Thoroughly enjoyed and related to, Ahena! Applause!

[Ahena MK]

thanks :) ..

[costa siwale]

An awesome piece Ahena..poetry in motion

[Ahena MK]

thanks !!!!

[Rida Sarwar]

really nicely penned :D keep it up!

[Ahena MK]

thanks !!!!

[Praveeta]

Well crafted poem Ahena. Thanks for sharing.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Talia The Hedgehog]

what sweet sorrow from great bonded words joined together to make the total awesomeness -Melancholy2D

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!

[m.s.early]

Reminded me of someone that is there own worst enemy or imprisoning themselves maybe from fear or guilt or shame.

All life's become a mime

We can be a parody of ourselves if we aren't careful...

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!

[Frieda P]

Intriguing sentiment here Ahena, made me think. So true when we understand what makes a person tick, we see so much more of who they really are.

I see the captcha has you peg'd too now ;-)

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!

[Frieda P]

My pleasure :-)