Empty Crowd

"what are we waiting for?"

Empty crowd

Acres and acres of land lay barren

Barren yet filled with loads of people

 

Dry leaves there lay on the bed 

The unfortunate deaths which haven’t yet

 

Thrives there lies and blind believers

Seeking hope from the destiny makers

Yet no reply comes from the heavens

For, to say lacks there education

 

-       Ahena Mk 

Author's Note

Lets literate the illiterate ....

Reviews

[s y e]

This is different and unique. I liked it.

[Ahena MK]

Glad you liked it

[Sue Hart]

The topic was strong and showed knowledge of the world. The last two lines struck me as powerful indeed.

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading sue :)

[Sue Hart]

You're very welcome.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Even one person can make an impact.So we should try to do what little we can.Well penned.

[Ahena MK]

True... Thanks ..

[Vidya Bacchus]

you are welcome:)

[Brittany Zedalis]

I like this one, it's different. ^-^

[Ahena MK]

Thanks Brittany ...

[m.s.early]

Provokes strong philosophical questions. Be the change you want to see in the world.

[Ahena MK]

True ... Thanks for reading ...

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem stated in short sentences of many problems. ' I wanted to know more. There will be always excuses for not doing things for the good. Old wise saying. "Must take the first step to begin the healing."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading .....

[Saddam]

WOW....you look very philoshopic in this poetry....i like more thisart... thanksfor sharing...loveya.

[Ahena MK]

Thanks ....