Deep crystalline

Natures mine- you are my diamond

Deep crystalline 

 

The deep crystalline sun carries 

Do not ponder my inside worries 

 

Cause there's love in every echo 

And a marble in a broken decor

 

Circles make me wonder why 

Why love has no entry sign

 

In it starts and circulates life

In the dead veins of mine

 

Through a hole there's another side

Where possibilities can’t often hide

 

And a pen can't sometimes write

With the key I unlock the only tide

Letting the waves enter my life

Bringing in with it natures mine, 

                                           You 

 Ahena MK 

Reviews

[Rida Sarwar]

wow! your poetry I must admit takes my breath away! ;)

[Justine]

"Circles make me wonder why
Why love has no entry sign"
I really like these lines and they certainly give the reader something to think about. This has a gentle tone to it, making for an enjoyable read :) Justine

[Ahena MK]

thank you!! .....
ahena :)

[Danny]

Beatiful! I enjoyed reading this poem!

"Cause there's love in every echo" :) ;) :)

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading ...

[Odysseus Wanders]

It approaches timidly, almost unsure, and then gains confidence as it writes itself to the surface, starts to circulate, believes in itself, then gains strength, then love busts forth in a wave, carrying this precious thing to you. There is such a wonderful sweeping motion to the piece. An palpable spiraling up and out.
Very cool Ahena... little treasure inside a treasure. Thanks.

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for the time and wonderful review .....
Ahena :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A very lovely write...nicely crafted. Great job! :)

[Ahena MK]

Thank you .....
Ahena :)

[Scott Metro]

Why love has no entry sign.......Very clever.
Very nice write.....

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Ahena MK]

Thank you ......
Ahena :)

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott......

[Sami Khalil]

Sweet as chocolate, strong as diamond, cute as a teddy bear...:)................

[Ahena MK]

Thank you ....
Ahena :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[Praveeta]

A sweet poem on love.
Love the line

"Bringing in with its natures mine, You"

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading ,
Ahena :)

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Tam Warink]

Vertigo ... and so, I lay flat and peer over the edge into that deep shaft - that natural diamond mine of love. Nicely done, Ahena.

100 loving echos

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading ...