Deep crystalline

Natures mine- you are my diamond

Deep crystalline 

 

The deep crystalline sun carries 

Do not ponder my inside worries 

 

Cause there's love in every echo 

And a marble in a broken decor

 

Circles make me wonder why 

Why love has no entry sign

 

In it starts and circulates life

In the dead veins of mine

 

Through a hole there's another side

Where possibilities can’t often hide

 

And a pen can't sometimes write

With the key I unlock the only tide

Letting the waves enter my life

Bringing in with it natures mine, 

                                           You 

 Ahena MK 

Reviews

[mahima]

Circles make me wonder why
Why love has no Entry sign....

Niiiice poem and a good picture too!!!!

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading

[costa siwale]

Very expressive poetry..well written

[Ahena MK]

thanks ..

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your words are powerful and makes me think :)

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Giggling Star]

Beautiful expressive write Ahena.

[Ahena MK]

thanks ...

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

This is such a beautiful piece. You have a wonderful and your very descriptive.

[Ahena MK]

Thankyou..

[Elena White]

It's very lovely, Ahena. I can say you're good at this. I just love the fact that I have to read again and again because it's very lovely. Well-done.

Elena.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!!

[Sami Khalil]

"Circles make me wonder why



Why love has no entry sign







In it starts and circulates life



In the dead veins of mine"

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading ...

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).....

[Frieda P]

Cause there's love in every echo
And a marble in a broken decor

Unique read Ahena, love that stanza...!

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!

[Frieda P]

My pleasure!! :-)

[Sue Hart]

a very unusual write. Many word combinations that stand out. "With the key I unlock the only tide letting the waves enter my life." That's my favorite. Well done.

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it !!!

[m.s.early]

a lovely title to start with

why doesn't love have an entry sign?

perhaps because true love happens when we aren't looking for it?

the last line structure, the way you is aligned to the right of the last line, makes for a good ending.

i admit, i knew it was a lover along.

kudos :)

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it !!
ahena :)