Undecided

"occupation confusion"

My life ...

Undecided

Time has come

The clock has struck

Ages, since it’s hung about

Ten years hence

i haven't thought 

What my life is all about

 

Show the way

I pray to god

Where I want

To hang around

 

In the plane

I fly abroad

Or cozily stay

In my hometown

 

Choose a man

Or build a house

Which one first

I haven’t thought

 

All this time I wondered what,

What my birth was all about 

                                              - Ahena MK 

Reviews

[Trace]

It's all about learning, living and loving.
Enjoy the ride of life.

Trace

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

I gotta agree with this poem, it is scary and frustrating trying to plan for the future, both because I hate the idea of shutting doors and limiting myself and because life always throws a curve ball

[Ahena MK]

i totally agree... thanks for reading !!

[Coyote Poetry]

You have time to decide your life. I gave my kids two pieces of advice. Pick a job you enjoy and travel, test life and have fun. You are young only for a short time. All of us wonder are we doing what we support to do. I believe we need to enjoy life and try to find some goodness in our life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ahena MK]

thanks coyote for your wonderful review and for the time you have spent with my poem... what you say is true you don't live young very long !!
ahena :)

[LadyAnn68]

I think we all at some point wonder this! Good write!

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!! so true !! glad you liked it !!

[NeiL ArandA]

Decisions and In decisions. Making the right decision was indeed the key to a happy, productive and successful life. Is their a book we could buy to help and guide us if not make our path straight and spare us from painful consequences ?
An old grandfather was telling his grandchild a very important lesson in life which has tremendous impact on whether he will be successful or a failure. The grandfather reiterate that the key is - " making the right choice or decision."
The grandchild scratched his head, a bit confused and asked his grandfather back - " well how do we know to make the right choice ?! "
His grandfather pause for a moment, patted his back and draw a sweet smile and said to his little grandchild inquisitive eyes - " by making wrong ones " ...

I hope you the best for your decision, most especially for a lifetime partner. Please consider consulting God. He wants to be personally involve in your life and His name is Jesus . Thanks for sharing your piece and your thoughts.. I learned and still learning from my past mistakes. I'm thankful that God is always there to give me a helping hand..Especially when I messed up or messed it up big time... God Bless to all your endeavors ...

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading ........ :)
and thanks for the wonderful review !!
ahena ...

[Sue Hart]

Sometimes the days turn into years. We wonder about what should have been and hope for may become. Your poem awakens the thought of considering the future and that fits all humankind. Beautifully done.

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it !!

[Giggling Star]

Very nice, Something we all think about at some time in our life.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading

[Giggling Star]

:) .............. thanks for visiting my page too!

[Danny]

This modern life is making us to make a lot of decisions. We all have expexctations that we must achieve. Usually those expectations are made by others(family, friends etc.). Sometimes is better just to let your life flow peacefully and slow.

I love when short poem gave you a lot of materials to think about it. And this poem does that.
Wonderfully penned!
100/100

[Ahena MK]

thank you!!

[My Favorite Writer !]

Confusion is always a state of mind ! But there is someone beyond that sky who is looking out for you and is penning each and every single move of yours. So just relax and enjoy the ride of life.
Your writing skills are exemplary.

[Ahena MK]

thank you!!

[An owl on the moon]

The world around us is so ripe with expectations.. anticipations.. choices... yes.. and the why of it all.. beautiful expressions here.

[Ahena MK]

thank you!!