An acrylic love

"colorful love"

An acrylic love

a heart of golden 

we stand by,

staring at each others 

acrylic eyes

 

singing songs

that meet our souls

coloring us

from the innermost

 

under the aurora 

we hold our hands

watching the colors 

mix and match

 

a love that met at it's day

under the sunlight 

we gave in away

 

an acrylic love 

it is i say

colors deep within 

showing the way

 

                 - Ahena MK 

Reviews

[Rida Sarwar]

enjoyed a lot! really romantic ;)

[Ahena MK]

Glad you enjoyed
Ahena :)

[Rida Sarwar]

pleausre ;)

[Frieda P]

Like your use of acrylic here Ahena, muchly enjoyed!

[Ahena MK]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. I like the use of color to give the poem reason and purpose. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading ...
Ahena

[KAin]

Nice! Indeed, the vibrance of rainbow hues can be seen in the eyes of those we love. Makes sense why lovers may stare into each others eyes... they're stunned by the radiance of the ever-shifting colours.
Keep up the good work, friend.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading
ahena

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is beautiful Ahena.Your pen is like a paintbrush painting a wonderful picture :)

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[writ rajat]

under the aurora
we hold our hands
watching the colors
mix and match its extremely romantic lines i hope these lines soon being true in my life thanks for your future telling

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading...
ahena

[Saddam]

a love that met at it's day
under the sunlight
we gave in away
beautifuly write. here is your colorful pen. loved it.

[Ahena MK]

thank you
ahena

[Jack...]

This was very cool. I liked the feel of this piece. A colorful array of all of what love can be.

[Ahena MK]

thank you
ahena

[Trace]

Very colorful writing.
I was at the store the other day and saw jars full of acrylic eyes.

Fun poem>
Trace

[Ahena MK]

oh... thats creepy.. thanks for reading
ahena :)

[Scott Metro]

Where does one find acrylic eyes..?

A nice little writing here Ahena...

Scott

[Ahena MK]

you can find all the colors in the eyes of a person you love .... could be anyone - mom, dad, sister brother, grandparents, husband or wife,, anyone you love ..... thanks for reading glad you liked it :)
ahena

[Scott Metro]

I see...I understand...very nice...very nice indeed.

[Ahena MK]

thank you ...