An acrylic love

"colorful love"

An acrylic love

a heart of golden 

we stand by,

staring at each others 

acrylic eyes

 

singing songs

that meet our souls

coloring us

from the innermost

 

under the aurora 

we hold our hands

watching the colors 

mix and match

 

a love that met at it's day

under the sunlight 

we gave in away

 

an acrylic love 

it is i say

colors deep within 

showing the way

 

                 - Ahena MK 

Reviews

[mahima]

An acrylic love
It is i say
colors deep within
showing the way

Hmm... Nice
Where did you get this beautiful title from?

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading .... :) and the title thing ... It's a secret !!!
U guess ... :)
Ahena ;)

[mahima]

Ah! You seriously want me guess then I am ready to guess it here!!!!

[Ahena MK]

Don't take trouble... ;)

[Sami Khalil]

"singing songs

that meet our souls

coloring us

from the innermost



under the aurora

we hold our hands

watching the colors

mix and match"

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading ...... :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[icelandicblue]

Love the title, it's a lovely poem.

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it ...

[Sami Khalil]

Very unique and romantic. You bring those eyes into the light...Bravo.........

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Quite romantic Ahena...nice!

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!!
ahena

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

i love romantic pieces that draw it beautiful constrast from the things in nature, a Remarkably painted piece, Excellent

[Ahena MK]

thank you!!
ahena :)

[Sue Hart]

I like the image of this. I believe most painters would enjoy that it tiptoes into their world of art. A very original piece.

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading....

[Rita L. Sev]

A multi-colored write to paint a picture of love; I like the form here, the short-lined stanzas invite the reader to pause, to take in each image. Great piece, Ahena!

[Ahena MK]

Thank you...

[Tam Warink]

What an odd use of a medium name. I'm trying to contrast it with "oil" love or "water color/colour" love or ... whatever. The only thing I can come up with is the time it takes to fix the love onto the canvas in a permanent state. Acrylic is much faster than oils - perhaps less so than water color/colour. So is this it then? The love was "quick" to set? Or perhaps the love was quick to dry, set and fly (away)? It's a mystery. Oh you poets with layer upon layer of hidden metaphor. What ever shall we do with you? MENU: Fresh boiled poet in metaphor sauce.

100 mixed menus

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading and for the wonderfully mystically deep review.... Love the way you interpreted the use of acrylic ...
Ahena :)