Stranded

Stuck on an island

Stranded  

Just like the seasons keep changing 

The moon light is often raging  

Across the globe one often flys 

Sickening on the way of the southern tide 

All across my hand I wrote 

Scribbling numbers and often quotes 

Often I wait alone at night  

Staring at the plain blue hopeful sky 

Praying for a plane to save my life 

Holy, there could be at least a ship 

For I knew how to talk a trip 

Stuck on this island ages since,        

                                       Through the        

                                       Dark ages        

                                       Of the seven         

                                       Nations,

There lays hope  

Somewhere in the sky 

For the stars  

Shine throughout  

The dark and Spooky night          

                                            -Ahena MK

Author's Note

Let me know how you feel....

Reviews

[Danny]

"Often I wait alone at night
Staring at the plain blue hopeful sky
Praying for a plane to save my life "

I find myself perfectly in these verses.
Great poem!
100/100

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for the wonderful review...

[Sue Hart]

Excellent write. Your imagination is something special. The stories behind your poems tend to reach out and grab you by the heart and shake until you wake up and feel.

[Ahena MK]

Thank you ...

[-Scribe in Style-]

This is some poem. I love the way the verses and ideas are intertwined and how they fit together so nicely. It is an awesome penned piece expressing a idea of hope and optimism.
I enjoyed the read.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading...
ahena

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

We all wait for the unknown ship or the unknown plane...

[Ahena MK]

ya we do... thanks for reading
ahena

[Rida Sarwar]

your imagination is worth appreciating :) you portraited the picture,perfectly :)

[Ahena MK]

thank you
ahena

[Rida Sarwar]

pleasure :)

[writ rajat]

i extremely become fan of the word hopeful night I want to write book on this word can i

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading,
Ahena

[costa siwale]

I fell like you are telling a life's journey, and I feel its a hopeful one, wonderfully done

[Ahena MK]

thank you....
ahena

[costa siwale]

You are welcome Ahena

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

i felt sad, scared and hopeful all at once imagining myself in the shoes of the speaker

[Ahena MK]

glad you felt it...
ahena:)

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

well...this one is a different piece of work......and it is crazy like james said....you wrote well...it worked!!!!!

[Ahena MK]

thank you ...